Perhaps me reading this was a Bad Idea?
I made it thru the first few sex scenes. They were hot, but squeaked me out (eating your own come). I just can't see Trip as a top.
It's just very hard for me to figure out what these two are on about. At one point, Trip even admits he doesn't get the reference.
T: Most people think I'm a nutbag. hmmmmm......
S: I want the next thing. But then, of course, I don't want any of that because I don't want just that. You, I mean. That is, all that would probably be a horrible mistake because its what I would do, not what I should do.
I wish I could finish and rate this, but I can't. In all fairness, I didnt like Hot Head either, so I've wandered outside my comfort zone.
Sunday, October 13, 2013
Monday, October 7, 2013
The Virgin: Revenge (The Virgin #1) J. Dallas
I enjoyed this beginning to their story, I liked the tension of seeing him after so long. I liked their chemistry and the sex scenes were good. There were some continuity problems. She thought he wouldn't remember her name? The book is titled revenge, yet she immediately gives up on her plans, not knowing why she's there. "Maybe I should have thought this through a little better." Yes, maybe you should.
Minus one star for typos.
The grammar errors need to be fixed before this goes out for sale. I personally feel it's unethical to offer a book for sale without proper editing. The reader purchases with the expectation of a readable story, and feels duped when they find no one has looked closely at the text.
I'm happy to do the editing for you, $100 and you'll have a readable legit copy.
"It was far simpler than way."
Saturday, October 5, 2013
THe Long Con
Angela Bee Bee's review
bookshelves: netgalley
Read from April 07 to 12, 2013
Loved this one. Its a bit short but very sweet and sexy. I could feel the intensity between them in the sex scenes, it was emotional and interesting. One thing, don't promise me a silver cock ring and not deliver.
They talk alot about bdsm, but dont actually do much more than a spanking and a little bondage with his tie.it's ok though, i was comfortable with the kink level.
Loved the way they took turns caring for each other, being dominant. Love It when a man ties a tie for another.
I liked how B thought he was gorgeous instantly and in every way sexy, all the time, totally distracting him from his task.
They talk alot about bdsm, but dont actually do much more than a spanking and a little bondage with his tie.it's ok though, i was comfortable with the kink level.
Loved the way they took turns caring for each other, being dominant. Love It when a man ties a tie for another.
I liked how B thought he was gorgeous instantly and in every way sexy, all the time, totally distracting him from his task.
Where you are J.H. Trumble
Angela Bee Bee's review
bookshelves: netgalley, my-best-reviews
Read from November 19 to 20, 2012
the age of consent in Texas is 17 and they have no student teacher specific law that applies after you turn 17*. so, it doesnt legally matter if robert is 17 versus 18, it is totally legal for him to be with drew. drew could still be accused/charged with sexual assault of a minor, but technically, hes innocent.
in some states, any teacher student sexual relationship, even texting, is a second degree felony. lets just say drew should not move to IL.
ethically, of course there is a teacher student code of conduct, which was clearly broken here, the second he gave his number and they started texting. his teaching career was very much in jeopardy but he didnt seem all that thrilled with teaching anyway. "i'm more concerned about you at the moment than i am about me"
for me, its not a big deal, despite the scandalous implication. drew is only 24. that is still very young. they are both hot for eachother, so let it fly!
i had several partners older than 18 when i was 16, 17. i never crossed the teacher/boss line, but i might have had the situation arose. i remember one of my bosses was so hot, he looked like robert kennedy jr.,(not unlike my avatar). i flirted and tried to get him to loosen up, but he never
succombed to my advances...and i was cute too, pretty little blond thing.
but i digress,
the book is sweet and interesting and heart wrenching. lots of big words and pop cultural references (map quest, twitter, even adele 'you had my heart inside your hand') , which i love in a read.
um, but they actually skip the sex scenes, so we dont really even know what goes down, or who....
these two go back and forth in their maturity levels, with robert becoming the wiser aggressor sometimes. interesting to watch drew melt under his charms.
its a beautiful interesting well written love story. if there was more detail in the sex scenes, then it would be 5 star.
*there was a law passed in texas in 2003, making any t/s relationship a felony, but it was later clarified to only apply to minors age 16 and younger. http://www.totalcriminaldefense.com/n...
http://trueslant.com/pattihartigan/20...
in some states, any teacher student sexual relationship, even texting, is a second degree felony. lets just say drew should not move to IL.
ethically, of course there is a teacher student code of conduct, which was clearly broken here, the second he gave his number and they started texting. his teaching career was very much in jeopardy but he didnt seem all that thrilled with teaching anyway. "i'm more concerned about you at the moment than i am about me"
for me, its not a big deal, despite the scandalous implication. drew is only 24. that is still very young. they are both hot for eachother, so let it fly!
i had several partners older than 18 when i was 16, 17. i never crossed the teacher/boss line, but i might have had the situation arose. i remember one of my bosses was so hot, he looked like robert kennedy jr.,(not unlike my avatar). i flirted and tried to get him to loosen up, but he never
succombed to my advances...and i was cute too, pretty little blond thing.
but i digress,
the book is sweet and interesting and heart wrenching. lots of big words and pop cultural references (map quest, twitter, even adele 'you had my heart inside your hand') , which i love in a read.
um, but they actually skip the sex scenes, so we dont really even know what goes down, or who....
these two go back and forth in their maturity levels, with robert becoming the wiser aggressor sometimes. interesting to watch drew melt under his charms.
its a beautiful interesting well written love story. if there was more detail in the sex scenes, then it would be 5 star.
*there was a law passed in texas in 2003, making any t/s relationship a felony, but it was later clarified to only apply to minors age 16 and younger. http://www.totalcriminaldefense.com/n...
http://trueslant.com/pattihartigan/20...
Release Me J Kenner
Angela Bee Bee's review
bookshelves: netgalley, favorites, my-best-reviews
Read from November 12 to 18, 2012
damien stark is my new favorite kinky bazillionaire; hot and sweet and compassionate and a little crazy.
"oh god, nikki, those pearls"
*this is how the blurb should go*...
their paths had crossed briefly before, when she was still her mothers show puppet and he was a slave to his tennis prodigy. they were kindered spirits, drawn together even then, but neither one free reach out to the other.
nikki fairchild has severed her ties to her mother an is starting her career away from texas, her mother, and the pain.
the reconnection between them now is electric, powerful, undeniable, hot. damien clearly wants her, even if he doesnt remember their brief first encounter.
he uses his power and wealth to court her, fierce and fast, impatient with her fears. but when he gets her naked, she is so vulnerable and beautiful, its heart wrenching.
nikki finds herself healing through sex, through submission and from damiens all consuming passion. can damien trust nikki with his demons as well, and perhaps finally posess vibrancy in his life hes only coveted through art before?
------ the cover should be the painting in the window, with the blowing curtains and a red satin sash... her hips in gray fog...implying the secret there.
-- this is smart smut. my dictionary feature got a workout on this one, and some of my favorite big words were used here too. some of the dialogue and the internal monologue was awkward in the beginning, but these two certainly created an enchanting spell by the close.
yummy words like: conflageration, flummoxed, lithe, enigmatic, corollary, lascivious, klaxons, maelstrom, liviried, obtuse, ...just so fun to read
and i.must get myself a pearl thong....asap
"oh god, nikki, those pearls"
*this is how the blurb should go*...
their paths had crossed briefly before, when she was still her mothers show puppet and he was a slave to his tennis prodigy. they were kindered spirits, drawn together even then, but neither one free reach out to the other.
nikki fairchild has severed her ties to her mother an is starting her career away from texas, her mother, and the pain.
the reconnection between them now is electric, powerful, undeniable, hot. damien clearly wants her, even if he doesnt remember their brief first encounter.
he uses his power and wealth to court her, fierce and fast, impatient with her fears. but when he gets her naked, she is so vulnerable and beautiful, its heart wrenching.
nikki finds herself healing through sex, through submission and from damiens all consuming passion. can damien trust nikki with his demons as well, and perhaps finally posess vibrancy in his life hes only coveted through art before?
------ the cover should be the painting in the window, with the blowing curtains and a red satin sash... her hips in gray fog...implying the secret there.
-- this is smart smut. my dictionary feature got a workout on this one, and some of my favorite big words were used here too. some of the dialogue and the internal monologue was awkward in the beginning, but these two certainly created an enchanting spell by the close.
yummy words like: conflageration, flummoxed, lithe, enigmatic, corollary, lascivious, klaxons, maelstrom, liviried, obtuse, ...just so fun to read
and i.must get myself a pearl thong....asap
Friday, October 4, 2013
Beyond Eden Kelle Moon
This is really three love stories, in one convoluted mess. I felt the danny/paul story was the lead and most compelling.
I would have liked to see a more emotional and developed conclusion. And i think the prologue and first chapter should have been from a male pov as evie is almost a secondary character here.
The bondage stuff was all within my comfort zone, but i can see why people might not like the cheating/jealousy stuff. But hey, its a menage, expect some jealousy.
I found paul and dan compelling and deep and sweet and complicated. All my kinks were covered.
The Eden thing seemed inconsistent at times, was eden good or bad? Lol.
The cover is ughhh, just ignore it.
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I would have liked to see a more emotional and developed conclusion. And i think the prologue and first chapter should have been from a male pov as evie is almost a secondary character here.
The bondage stuff was all within my comfort zone, but i can see why people might not like the cheating/jealousy stuff. But hey, its a menage, expect some jealousy.
I found paul and dan compelling and deep and sweet and complicated. All my kinks were covered.
The Eden thing seemed inconsistent at times, was eden good or bad? Lol.
The cover is ughhh, just ignore it.
2 typos
Jagged kristen ashley
5 stars
I DON'T MIND THE NAME HAM. (ducks tomatoes)<br> I may be the only one. KA could name her man Spaghetti and I'd drop my panties for him. Ham to me is like a ramblin trucker nickname (CB radio). I also liked the name Hop. I'm easy.<br><br><em> Don't you call yourself Graham?<br>Would you call yourself Graham?</em><br><br>Graham cracker and cookie. Lol whateva.<br><br>KA makes Ham's imperfections visceral, almost too painful. He cares for Feb, he fights dirty, he creates doubt. Does he just want her cuz she's easy and fertile?<br>But his actions, and finally his words tell her strongly. She's his. Always was. He just was not that man then. He's the man now, for sure. <br>Ham is the man.<br><br>I had a ramblin man once. Had to let him go. Know the feelin', darlin.<br><br>I've been wishing for a travelin man book, love Zac Brown band colder weather song and felt like it needed a story by KA. This one is better than I wished for. it's like she wrote this story for me. Thank you kristen for this gift. Big bear hug.<br><em><br>She'd trade Colorado if he'd take her with him<br>Closes the door before the winter lets the cold in,<br>And wonders if her love is strong enough to make him stay,<br>She's answered by the tail lights shining through the window pane<br><br>He said I wanna see you again<br>But I'm stuck in colder weather<br>Maybe tomorrow will be better<br>Can I call you then?<br>She said you're ramblin' man<br>You ain't ever gonna change<br>You got a gypsy soul to blame<br>And you were born for leavin' </em><br>
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