Wanted J.Kenner

2 stars

The sex was hot and the tension was high....until they did it.
I was into this until about 58%, then i dropped out and couldn't get back in. It became cheesy and trite and Evan's character was inconsistent. Is he dangerous or the boy next door? He constantly was sticking his finger in her. 
Perhaps I have outgrown kinky bazillionaires? Is it possible?

The cover is way too dark and I can't see the image or text on my kindle carousel or GR shelf. Needs more contrast.
Two annoying, easily fixed typos.

All In with the Duke

The Duke: I have a fondness for leather.
The Rent Boy: I surmised as such.

Max and Tristan are extremely likable. OK, they are lovable! Esp. Max. I've got a little crush on Max, The Duke of Pelham.

I might have given this 4 stars for the predictable story, but the black marble dildo is worth one star alone. It's like a third MC. Hooray for delivering a promised dildo, avoiding pet peeve number #60 and scoring one for kink #1.

Truthfully, Max's frustration and loneliness is so endearing and he's all pure hot alpha. And Tristan is lithe, brave, strong, never showing fear of Max's mood swings. I just wanted to hug drunken brooding Max, rub all his worries away.

Kudos for no typos and a pleasant phrasing and pace throughout. I would have liked to see more external conflict (an ex-lover, a public scandal, something) but still really enjoyed spending time in jolly old England with these two sweet horny blokes, and the dildo.