Tuesday, August 5, 2014
On Hold
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Wednesday, March 19, 2014
Spin C.D. Reiss Songs of Corruption #1
** two stars
"You mean there’s still a mafia?”
“Yes, Virginia, there is a mafia."
This girl thinks with her "wettest spot" and her wet spot gets her into a ton-o-trouble.
She's all over the place and so is he. They're both nuts.
The dirty sex and the violent capo carry the book, glossing over lots of weird crap that doesn't flow or make sense.
The writing is intentionally jangly to create tension. Well, I hope it's intentional, otherwise it's just bad.
This book requires a certain amount of letting go, enjoying the crazy ride. It reminded me of a night time soap like Dallas or Falcon Crest. That's not really my thang. I like my stories firmly based in reality.
The audio for this book is gonna be awkward...
“I want you,” I said. “I want you to fuck my virgin ass so hard.“
“Every day,” he whispered, “I’ll take you like this. In the morning, before coffee, I fuck you. At night, I fuck you harder. In our bedroom, our living room, our kitchen, I’ll love you in every room. Mi amore, I’ll break you with my love and put you back together. And when I retire, you still call me Capo because you’re mine. Always mine.“
Ameliorate, to make something bad, better.
"You mean there’s still a mafia?”
“Yes, Virginia, there is a mafia."
This girl thinks with her "wettest spot" and her wet spot gets her into a ton-o-trouble.
She's all over the place and so is he. They're both nuts.
The dirty sex and the violent capo carry the book, glossing over lots of weird crap that doesn't flow or make sense.
The writing is intentionally jangly to create tension. Well, I hope it's intentional, otherwise it's just bad.
This book requires a certain amount of letting go, enjoying the crazy ride. It reminded me of a night time soap like Dallas or Falcon Crest. That's not really my thang. I like my stories firmly based in reality.
The audio for this book is gonna be awkward...
“I want you,” I said. “I want you to fuck my virgin ass so hard.“
“Every day,” he whispered, “I’ll take you like this. In the morning, before coffee, I fuck you. At night, I fuck you harder. In our bedroom, our living room, our kitchen, I’ll love you in every room. Mi amore, I’ll break you with my love and put you back together. And when I retire, you still call me Capo because you’re mine. Always mine.“
Ameliorate, to make something bad, better.
Friday, January 3, 2014
Kaleidoscope Kristen Ashley
Deck lifted his hand and wrapped his fingers in a firm grip around the side of Chace's neck. They locked eyes.
'Happy for you man.'
Chace lifted his hand and returned Deck's gesture.
'Yeah.'
****OMG! Can we please have a KA M/M book? Please! With strawberries on top?***
And...I just realized a theme of the mountain man series (view spoiler)
Anyhoo, loved Kaleidoscope as much as the others in this series. I like the relationship focused, well developed story. I like the good guy, genius aspect of this and the subtle complicated conflict.
There is some discussion about the loss of a child. The irony that loving a child so much can leave you paralyzed with fear.
A painful subject for me, but also a sweet reminder not to let such fears overpower.
Loved Jacob's two sides; crude alpha vs. gentle saint. I wish more of the story was about his issues. Why the Hell was he hung up on someone named Elsbeth all those years? Elsbeth? really?
I'm glad we got some mountain man pool action. These boys should be constantly wet I think. yep.
Did a little fangirl squee at the mention of Hector's name, and the hot bunch doing some manual labor together. whew. nice.
There is something so warm and comforting about this writing style, the dialogue familiar, strong, and funny. All confirming my 'Kristen Ashley is a genius' theory.
Editing notes.
The cover looks alot like
. The perspective on the cover is incorrect, making the house appear like it's folding outward, the mountains are too small. If you're going to use graphics, at least use good ones. That said, I love the green theme.
Three typos. One excruciating one in the epilogue. How can you not read the most important sentence in the whole book? His hands would treat me with just as much care....grrrrr.
not angry enough to take away a star though.
Jacob. Decker. sigh....
'Want you to kiss me, honey' she murmured.
'Taste of you baby' he reminded her.
'I don't care' she replied, then lost patience as she bent her neck to take his mouth.
'Happy for you man.'
Chace lifted his hand and returned Deck's gesture.
'Yeah.'
****OMG! Can we please have a KA M/M book? Please! With strawberries on top?***
And...I just realized a theme of the mountain man series (view spoiler)
Anyhoo, loved Kaleidoscope as much as the others in this series. I like the relationship focused, well developed story. I like the good guy, genius aspect of this and the subtle complicated conflict.
There is some discussion about the loss of a child. The irony that loving a child so much can leave you paralyzed with fear.
A painful subject for me, but also a sweet reminder not to let such fears overpower.
Loved Jacob's two sides; crude alpha vs. gentle saint. I wish more of the story was about his issues. Why the Hell was he hung up on someone named Elsbeth all those years? Elsbeth? really?
I'm glad we got some mountain man pool action. These boys should be constantly wet I think. yep.
Did a little fangirl squee at the mention of Hector's name, and the hot bunch doing some manual labor together. whew. nice.
There is something so warm and comforting about this writing style, the dialogue familiar, strong, and funny. All confirming my 'Kristen Ashley is a genius' theory.
Editing notes.
The cover looks alot like
. The perspective on the cover is incorrect, making the house appear like it's folding outward, the mountains are too small. If you're going to use graphics, at least use good ones. That said, I love the green theme.Three typos. One excruciating one in the epilogue. How can you not read the most important sentence in the whole book? His hands would treat me with just as much care....grrrrr.
not angry enough to take away a star though.
Jacob. Decker. sigh....
'Want you to kiss me, honey' she murmured.
'Taste of you baby' he reminded her.
'I don't care' she replied, then lost patience as she bent her neck to take his mouth.
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